Evita and a journey of a lifetime

Author : Shiny Vaporeon(KV)

Date sent : October 04, 2011

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Other

Description : this is the story of my new coming up character Evita.I think this is coming out pretty good so I am going to post it, would love to get your opinions! :D if you want your horse to be a friend of hers in one of the places she goes to pm me ^^ and keep a look out for the next chapter!

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Evita and a journey of a lifetime
By Shiny Vaporeon(KV)

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October 25, 2011
Usa Is not currently on the site
Good story. Cant wait to hear the rest. :howl: :duckiemouth: :allears: :closedgrin:

October 08, 2011
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
thanks! and yea I know xD I suck at puncuation xD that always gets me sadly XD glad someone has read it though and likes it!! I need to start on chapter 2 but when Im sick all I want to do is color XD

October 07, 2011
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
Tring to keep the darkness in.
Very good. You use some really nice words. Though, I think you need some more punchuation. ;) Please don't take that to heart, just a little friendly advice. But, I think you did really well, I really love the begining. It was really well writen. Great job, can't wait until chapter two.

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