The Lion King III: Hidden Prophecy Part I

Author : BlackJack16

Date sent : October 10, 2009

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Epic

Description : It is the day after the war between the Simba's Pride and the Outsiders, who are now apart of; or "one" with Simba's Pride; and everyone has now settled down to live together in peace. But Kiara fears that they are not out of danger yet as she suspects that Zira might have survived her fall into the river. Nala also suspects that there might be someone out there to be considered a threat.

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The Lion King III: Hidden Prophecy Part I
By BlackJack16

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May 22, 2010
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^ ^ It's awesome! You're a natural at writing!

Also, you said you wanted some say on how you could improve your writing. The one thing I noticed was that when writing dialogue, after a character is finished speaking, make another paragraph before writing another character's dialogue. Like this sort of:

"Hi," said Kiara to Kovu.
"Hey Kiara," replied Kovu.

Otherwise I think it's epicness! :D

April 12, 2010
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great can't wait for the next part !

March 27, 2010
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Very good. I hope you continue this! :P

March 07, 2010
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this is so cool DO PART 2 PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

November 29, 2009
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i like it please do part 2 PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11




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