Tale Spin Virtual Season Comic Number 1!

Godzillawolf · **Posted:** Sun Mar 27, 2011 11:43 am

Wow! Nice work! Can't wait to see it finished!

steet · **Posted:** Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:28 pm

And if you didn't see it yet, here's my cover for the comic :

I also started laying out the 4-pages introduction to the comic (which will come just before Aku's) :

(of course, it's FAR from being finished)

Aku => This is looking great! I have only one advice, you should maybe add some margins between the panels. I noticed almost all comics have that, so that it's clearer and easier to read. (mine are a little too big though, I admit) The only exception seems to be when a panel is inside another, large important one.

Godzillawolf · **Posted:** Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:43 pm

Very good, Steet. The cover looks very professional.

steet · **Posted:** Fri Apr 15, 2011 2:30 pm

After a lot of work, here comes preliminary sketches for page 2!

Of course there's a lot to fix. Especially on the art side of course, but I think we could improve those dialogues too, I have a hard time writing Karnage.

Overall I think it will take me a very long time; but I intend to work on these 4 pages until they look as good as the cover.

Aku · **Joined:** Thu Oct 14, 2010 9:45 pm **Posts:** 25

04-18-11 Update!

steet · **Posted:** Fri Apr 29, 2011 2:45 pm

Well, sorry guys, I thought I could finish sketches for page 3 before I go on vacation, but I will have to push this back a little. I still did a little progress so you'll have something to expect. See you in one week!

Karny90 · **Joined:** Sun May 15, 2011 6:34 am **Posts:** 33

Aku and steet, you're doing incredible work!
Such a shame that I just can't draw

But I'll try to help by giving ideas!
I can't wait to see what's next! (especially the final comic pages)

steet · **Posted:** Sun May 22, 2011 11:35 am

Finally, here are sketches for my page 3! That one is a little more detailed than the previous, sometimes I felt like doing better...

Follow some comments from Jer, I will replace Karnage's plane with the Iron Vulture in the final version, so that it makes more sense.

Godzillawolf · **Posted:** Sun May 22, 2011 7:28 pm

Really nice work! I like the bonk part. Though maybe add a little more between Becky and Baloo's arguement showing Becky's response? (I imagine some guilt). Just a thought.

steet · **Posted:** Mon May 23, 2011 12:25 am

I know, the scenes are very "contracted", due to the fact this is an action scene so I wanted things to go quickly.
When I'll work on the "2nd pilot" itself, I'll makes the scenes longer so that there is more explanation and show more feelings between the characters.
For now, I just meant to show off the contradictory attitude of Becky which often happens in the show

steet · **Posted:** Mon May 23, 2011 12:31 pm

bambamXD wrote:

You're doing an excellent job with the comics Steet!

Thank you! It's quite a lot of work...

ArChip · **Posted:** Mon May 23, 2011 2:04 pm

Keep it up, Steet and don't stop drawing!

steet · **Posted:** Mon May 23, 2011 2:32 pm

ArChip wrote:

Keep it up, Steet and don't stop drawing!

Sure won't! I'm very looking forward to inking and coloring the final comic pages...

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