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I recently started a fanfic series called Beginning Eternity. I will post it on the site when it's done; in the meantime I've been putting it on FanFiction.Net, where it's gotten some pretty decent reviews so far.

Here's the link, if you want to check it out. Feel free to read and review; tell me what you think about it.

And trust me--I need the feedback. Otherwise it'll turn out horrible.

It looks great, absolutely! You've done a great job writing it, and I think you should keep it up.

Thanks! I've been on a huge writing kick lately, so Pt 1 may be done within a few weeks.
Then I start part 2. Joy.

Hey, a little random question.
In your FF profile says that you like Immediate Music, you listento it when you are writin' your stories? If yes, me too

To be honest, I just listen to a variety of music when I'm writing. There's a mix of IM, TSFH, XRD, and more.

Great job so far, keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more.

Just a little update for everyone: Spark of Fallout is almost done, so I should be able to post the rest of it and start part 2 (working title: "Young Shadows") within several weeks [depending on how school works out for me].

Well, I've already got one story I promised someone I would read. But I'll have to check this one out at some point as well.

And Spark of Fallout is done! The link is the same as in the OP.

Part two is started. Wish me luck!

An update for those of you who are still following this: I've deleted what I had had posted on FF.Net because I was a horrible writer then. But the good news is that I'm rewriting the series, and I'll be reposting each chapter as I finish. Here's the new link for Chapter 1: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11080734/1 ... nd-REWRITE

Chapter one looks interesting, and it ends on a particularly striking note (I'd like to see more done with the idea of a devil impersonating a dead loved one, though I'm not sure how at the point where you have things). Also, there is one detail which, if you do a third draft of this, you might want to address; where did Adera get the milk she would need to survive infancy?
Chapter 2 certainly paints an interesting origin story for Aniu; perhaps the first time Ive seen a feasable explanation of her being a halfa (half-mortal, half-ghost, like Danny Phantom), which is particularly interesting to me as I first saw the notion put forward by redwolf03.

Hmm, I'm honestly not sure how I didn't catch that (or at least do anything about it) since I started writing this. I'll have to rewrite the first chapter again, I guess. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
To be honest, I've been busy with other things, and so I haven't worked on this story in at least a few months. But once I get some more free time, I'll definitely pick it up again.

And I'm glad you like my origin for Aniu. Without saying too much, it will play an important role in later parts of the story.

I can relate.

My Balto series is on the back burner for now, but if you'd still like to follow my writing, I've been working on an original story called Dividing Reason.
It's still in the process of being written, but I'm almost done with it. Here is the first chapter for those of you interested. I'll continue to post chapters as long as I get some constructive feedback.

Certainly quite heart-wrenching. I'm curious to see where you'll be taking this.