Melting Up Prolouge

Author : Falinelover101

Date sent : January 12, 2013

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : Inspired by JetxLucy,AK,Defyinggravity comes a what if fanfic about what if Faline liked Ronno and not Bambi.When the groundhog ceremony comes around Ronno and faline kiss. Bambi is heartbroken because he likes faline.Bambi's mother is still alive but a stag named scratch kills the Great Prince and mates with her.Fawna, Faline's sister is also heartbroken because she likes Ronno. Bambi and Fawna run off to the outlander-like herd and meet four fawns. The athletic Pine, the dull Athena, the smart moss, and the beuatiful Sara. the fawns tell Bambi and Fawna about scratch and Faline meets someone interesting. The story is pretty backwards and when you are backwards you are melting up instead of down.

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Melting Up Prolouge
By Falinelover101

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February 03, 2013
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
Melting up is in da must sees!

January 29, 2013
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this title seemes to fit it better.

January 20, 2013
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
I know right.

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January 20, 2013
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OH Woahs everything is so backwards ^ ^

January 13, 2013
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
He ran off because of a broken because (when I change it) thumper was belived to make him leave

January 13, 2013
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Yeah, it is better. Definition:
Stepsibling - if a child's parent marries another person with a child, the children are stepsiblings

Halfsiblings - if a child's parent has a child with a person that is not the first child's mother, it's a half-sibling

That's a difference! :)


But Simba was told to run off by Scar. Bambi wasn't told by anyone, he just did...without a real reason.

January 13, 2013
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
Better than the other fanficx

January 13, 2013
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
It is not awful. well i don't know the difference between half and step siblings. They left mostly because of the great prince well bambi is like Simba from the lion king. #1 he runs away because of a family death. Well #2 is that he defeats the animal who killed his father. i was thinking of modifying it.

January 12, 2013
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It's not awful, it's just very rushed and not very logical in some places. Like that a fawn produced by Fawn and Scratch would not be Bambi's step- but Bambi's half-sibling. And also I don't think Bambi's mother would ever forget about him. That's just as out of character as that Thumper would fall in love at first sight at that age. There are more things, like that it's not very convincing that Bambi and Fawna leave the forest just because they're broken-hearted and how the Great Prince died, but you probably already hate me, for criticizing you, so I just shut up.
And for the record, that's not intended to be mean, this is just a friendly advise.

January 12, 2013
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
It is not that great

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