Descendant of the stars chapter 5: Doom

Author : JetxLucy

Date sent : September 28, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : Vertrou finds true love, and Nocere and Lojalis relationship is sparking. Bambi and Faline are now proud parents to two fawns, Geno and Gurri. Ronno and May seemed to have split up, leaving May with all the children, and Ronno to go else where. Still the forest seems peaceful until Ronno decides to get even with Bambi, and a strange buck makes a disturbing appearance ....

Length : Very short -

Characters :
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Descendant of the stars chapter 5: Doom
By JetxLucy

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September 28, 2012
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Thanks for that advicelol

September 28, 2012
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The rut has no special date, it's just a period of time when deer mate.
The chapter was interesting, but again, I think it's all going on to fast. Half the time, you don't know what's going on. Give your characters room to breath, describe their feelings if needed, but don't rush through the story you want to tell.




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