The Meeting

Author : singingcollie

Date sent : August 19, 2010

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Other

Description : this take's place a little while after all dogs go to heaven 2. Charlie and Sasha have recently gotten engaged and decide to have a night out on the town and go the "flea bite" to celebrate, when Charlie meets an old friend. Please no flames! It's my first fanfic and i'm thinking about making a sequal but i would like to get some feedback first

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The Meeting
By singingcollie

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February 24, 2011
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I can't wait to hear more

August 24, 2010
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:)

August 23, 2010
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BlueMoonsoon&Unalaq Omega
Understandable. If this is your first who wouldn't be excited to write a story? :3

August 23, 2010
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thank you for your advice ansem :D i see what you mean :) I'll admit i did rush a bit on this but this idea popped into my head and i had to type it up lol

August 22, 2010
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BlueMoonsoon&Unalaq Omega
I'll admit, I like the story. And I'm serious I'd definitely read a sequel. However I do have a few problems with this one. I feel that the talking is to close together.

It had been five months since Charlie met Sasha at the flea bite, and this was the first time they had been back since then. The German Shepherd Mix and the Irish Setter had recently gotten engaged, so a visit to flea (censored) was the perfect way to celebrate. “Aaaahhh…I’m so glad we finally get a night to ourselves” Sasha mused. “I can drink to that” Charlie joked, as they walked up to the bar and ordered two draft beers. Sasha cracked a smile at his joke, and took a dainty sip of her drink “the old place hasn’t changed at all has it?” she said, glancing around the bar.

It had been five months since Charlie met Sasha at the Fleabite, and this was the first time they had been back since then. The German Shepherd mix and the Irish setter had recently gotten engaged, so a visit to the Fleabite was the perfect way to celebrate.
"Aaaaahhh... I'm so glad we finally get a night to ourselves." Sasha mused.
"I can drink to that." Charlie joked as they walked up to the bar and ordered two draft beers. Sasha cracked a smile at his joke, and took a dainty sip of her drink.
"The old place hasn't changed at all has it?" She said, glancing around.

Now, I'm not saying that my way is proper, but its easier on the eyes to know who is talking instead of it all jumbled up in one thing. But like I said earlier, I'd definitely read a sequel, good job on this being your very first, and keep on writing.




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