*thumbs up* On it boss.

XD awesome, I look forward to more ^w^

P.S: That's an Order XP, I've always wanted to say that

This isn't my first time writing a fan fic, however this is my first ADGTH one. Thanks either way. I STILL hate that typo in that 'You two are bozos you know that?' where I missed the ending quotation mark... It drives me insane.

EDIT: Found a way to fix it. Yes!

Very good for your first time. The characters were themselves, the situation was in keeping with their personalities, and you even had pretty good paragraph breakup (something most people miss).

I'm looking forward to whatever comes next.

Thanks! To be honest, I sent it in completely on accident. I was hoping that by clicking the 'tell a mod I'm done' button that it would give me a list on who to send it to so I could PM one some questions. Oh well, guess I should get to work on another one and try to make it longer now that I know what everything does.

By the way, remember that Golden Retriever? It's based off my little bro, who really does do that sort of thing, and Zero's dialogue back and forth with him is pretty much what I have said and gotten a reply.

EDIT: Also, SIR YES SIR! *salutes* (Aimed at the demand by the way.)

This is a good one here! I demand this be continued! XD I wanna see more of it!