Dipstick lover: Thanks, I worked hard on it.

Ottersisfun: I think it did that to the paragraphs because I was on my iPad, but I'm gonna fix it. I don't normally write like that. I'm extremely grammar-efficient!

SpotOn: Cool name! I tried to stick to the book (It's one of my favorites) and making the dialogue like the movie would was a lot of fun. I'm glad you noticed! And thanks, Splatter is my favorite of all of my characters. I'm sooo happy you said he was unique. That's what I was going for. Some people on the site make characters that are faved mostly for their pictures and not so much for their quality of character, so that means a lot to me. Thanks!

This is really good. You made the writing style a lot like the book, you didn't go on and on, and you made the dialogue realistic, or as if it were something right out of the movie. This is the best fanfic so far. Great job, and Splatter is such a unique character.

At first I almost did not read it cuz there arent any paragraphs, but you did such a good job I couldn't stop reading so to speak! Lucky is my favorite too.

Wow just wow. It's just like watching a movie they way they talk ands splatter is so cute! aawwww i feel bad for him.

Check that out!