Untaken Path: Chapter 6 Manipulative Shadow

Author : Feathervenom

Date sent : August 23, 2012

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Epic

Description : A new doe stirs up the bucks of the herd - Nacht included - and causes Trar to have problems keeping control. Faline discovers she is pregnant with the fawn of Nacht, and seeks to run away so she may hope the fawn does not turn into it's father.

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Untaken Path: Chapter 6 Manipulative Shadow
By Feathervenom

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August 29, 2012
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Oh I wod NOT stop in the middle! that would just be too cruel!
Thanks for all those compliments. When I get home tonight I'll get to work.
Then break to feed my rabbits...
And probably forget what I was doing XD

August 29, 2012
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I can't find the words.... :o

Epic. Awesome. Extreme. Superb. Tremendous. Thrilling.

Yeah, I think those sum it up! :P

Of course, I can't help but read Nacht's dialogue in Davy Jone's voice...and I can't help but read Lihua's voice in a charming and innocent Chinese-accent XD

This is turning out to be so exciting >_< I've never been so eager to read a fic. I love thrillers. The only bad part about this story is the feeling I get when the chapters END!! I want to keep reading!

So please keep writing. I would be sorely disappointed if this story were dropped in the middle. I anxiously await the next chapter!!!


And for those of you who are wondering, Lihua's name is pronounced, LEE-HOW ;)

August 28, 2012
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Next chapter, introducing a few new characters, and Lihua in more depth!

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